Feb 232010
 

 

An Ode to Valley Fever

 

Breathe them in

To the lungs

Airborne filaments and spores

In the warm, moist pleura

Spots and spingles form

Then plan

Their next move

 ~

For most

It is mild,

This inner invasion

~It means~

Fever, cough, chills, ache

Perhaps a rough, red rash

Six months

A year

You’re better

~

For others

Even twenty years later

Fever, weight loss, cough, chest pain

Blood-tinged sputum

Nodules to blame

But you don’t die

For the vulnerable few

Lung growths, ulcers, abrasions form

Skull, spine and bone lesions, the norm

Knees, ankles, other joints ache

The brain and spinal cord join in

Forsake

~

Recourse?

Rest

Fluconazole

Itraconazole

~But perhaps most important~

Learn the lessons

Do your best

This may be

The final test.

A few years ago, my dear friend died from a mad conflagration of valley fever and lung cancer. This piece emerged from that experience.

For the latest information regarding Coccidioidomycosis, commonly called Valley Fever, click here.

  7 Responses to “KOK-see”

  1.  

    I’d never heard of this. It sounds brutal, even in its mildest form.

    I think in America we forget that people can (and do) die of infectious diseases until someone dies of pneumonia or strep or meningitis.

    I’m sorry for your friend, for your loss.

  2.  

    oh my – this is a tough topic but you mastered the write very well…sorry for the loss of your friend kim…

  3.  

    Gosh, I hadn’t heard of Valley Fever, but your poem certainly describes well the pain of any lung disease. So sorry for your loss..

  4.  

    Very informational and wonderfully written… sorry about your friend.

    Enjoy each and every day!

  5.  

    This piece just aches, beautiful ~ Rose

  6.  

    ugh. dont know if i have ever read such a description in poetic form…finely tuned but onmy way to get some vitamin c…smiles.

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